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The Port of Distance by ~ruinedsoul:iconruinedsoul:



Carelessly thinking about everything
   With the big picture you'd think you'd see more
I feel like an outcast to say this
   But my heart of stone is lying on the floor

A chill runs down my spine
   The beautiful chords of screams, guitar, and strings
Rain drops falling to the already moistened earth below
   Just to forget about the world you hate and all the things

I never realized that there was always a way out
   It was in the back of my mind the whole time
I could run away, and actually be something
   And then everything would be just fine

I would hide from you, if I never had to see you again
Not that I don't love them, I just don't want back in

The black hole.

   Which destroys every being within its swirling magnetic grips.

Unappetising rotting cardboard boxes
   Sluts whoring their temple to foreign men, and objects
Fat slobs eating their drug of choice. Big Mac with the works
   The forgotten sun light, and the wish for something more

My choice, my life, do not tell me who I have to be
I have rebelled against everything I once knew

   This foreign feeling. What is that taste?

Freedom.

Oh, so you mean you didn't know you were a prisoner the whole time?

I could have told you that.

Aaron Nolan (c)
Dezember 24, 2004
Bundesrepublik Deutschland
©2004-2009 ~ruinedsoul
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Dreams, and memories slowly distort the true picture, was I really there? Or is it all just in my head? Is the world where I come from still there in its form which I remember it?

The way the city burns, the bitter taste I can't forget. The taste that you want to forget...
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"Carelessly thinking about everything
With the big picture you'd think you'd see more"
I really love that part.

"Fat slobs eating their drug of choice. Big Mac with the works"
And I like that one alot too.

Great poem. I had to read it three times before I could write the comment, and still I don't have anything smart to say... but uhm.. I like it very much ^^;
Thanks bro, its alright, I dunno what to write about poetry either. I'd rather be submitting masses of photos (and drawings), but unfortunately I don't have any access to a scanner... arr

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it occurred to me at once that love could be a great illusion
that makes fools of brilliant thinkers every day.

TIMASHUK! my rock music,Incheonlazerhead
Hey, this is really good. I like it. It actually brings out the real you in it. Not sure why, but it does.

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What is beauty unless you intend to use it?
so fucking true, this just hits me like a giant fucking hammer... why didn't i read this a few months ago? either way my entire matter has all been crushed into a single molecule by this place now...

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[link] - Nelson Esquire accoustic rock and electronic or whatever you really want to call it, listen to it and feel my sonic seduction
yeah so fucking true
this ones perfect

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don't think
es regt mich zum nachdenken an! sehr interessant..... da fällt mir ein ich muss mal wieder guitar üben!

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Sleep on tight, til the sunlight burns you happy
Thanks bro, its alright, I dunno what to write about poetry either. I'd rather be submitting masses of photos (and drawings), but unfortunately I don't have any access to a scanner... arr

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it occurred to me at once that love could be a great illusion
that makes fools of brilliant thinkers every day.

TIMASHUK! my rock music,Incheonlazerhead
Thanks a lot! Very nice to hear. I wonder why it has that effect, maybe just the way I've been feeling inspired in the last days, but more in a 'i don't care anymore' kinda way.

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it occurred to me at once that love could be a great illusion
that makes fools of brilliant thinkers every day.

TIMASHUK! my rock music,Incheonlazerhead
Blackhole of humanity man, thats all it is. Its a message, save yourself.

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it occurred to me at once that love could be a great illusion
that makes fools of brilliant thinkers every day.

TIMASHUK! my rock music,Incheonlazerhead
:D thanks bud

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it occurred to me at once that love could be a great illusion
that makes fools of brilliant thinkers every day.

TIMASHUK! my rock music,Incheonlazerhead

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